February 16th, 2007

We Were One: Shoulder to Shoulder With the Marines Who Took Fallujah

 by Nathan Alexander  
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WeWereOne.jpg In his book We Were One, Patrick K. O'Donnell helps transform the debate on Iraq from a survey of whether or not non-democratic nations approve of America bringing democracy to Iraq — to one involving our neighbors, families, sons and daughters.

We Were One: Shoulder to Shoulder with the Marines who took Fallujah
by Patrick K. O'Donnell
published Da Capo Press (2006)
Hdbk., 244 pgs.
ISBN: 0306814692

Patrick K. O’Donnell has written We Were One, an account of 3rd battalion, 1st Marine regiment’s assault into the occupied Iraqi town of Fallujah, to remind Americans that the war in Iraq is more than just the debate over WMDs or whether one agrees with the policies of George Bush. The men who are fighting in Iraq are part of the next “Greatest Generation,” he writes, and fight as a “modern band of brothers.” O’Donnell went through basic training to get the right to accompany “Lima” Platoon in its Fallujah operations. “From the ground” he follows the experiences of four sets of friends from their high school days through their time in Fallujah. Only four of these men made it home.

We Were One attempts to be an action-packed account of the bloody fighting that would cost Lima platoon 32 casualties among its 46 members. Descriptions of combat are graphic and O’Donnell isn’t afraid to include the Marines’ salty commentary. Technology may have altered the way wars are fought, but ground soldiers remain the backbone of modern urban combat.

O’Donnell makes a number of interesting observations concerning the nature of the war. Coalition troops, as was the case in Vietnam during the mid-sixties, operate from their bases — they do not live closely with the Iraqis. Towards the latter years of the Vietnam War, the Marine Corps had success in pacification by placing smaller units in villages.1  Despite frequent comparisons between Iraq and Vietnam, I’ve yet to read anyone advocate that Americans adopt this successful strategy in Baghdad.

O’Donnell does a good job discussing how current “Rules of Engagement” cost American lives. For example, while most if not nearly all of Fallujah’s civilians had departed the city before the battle, Americans were prevented from using artillery and mortars to engage the enemy from a distance. In fact, “America’s high tech firepower, smart bombs, and artillery had largely been neutralized . . . in part by political pressure.”  Much of the combat in Fallujah was accomplished with improvised weapons — Bangalore torpedoes and bulldozers. Despite bipartisan insistence from the U.S. Congress of “support for the troops,” there has yet to be any account of how the current “rules of engagement” have resulted in higher US casualties.

O’Donnell reports that “over half” of Fallujah’s 99 mosques were filled with insurgents who used them as fighting positions and arsenals. It would be interesting to know if in any conflict involving Islamic radicals whether Jihadists have ever shown any deference to sacred sites or holidays. O’Donnell reports that the Islamacists whom the Marines encountered were fully aware of the American rules of engagement and exploited them at every opportunity. Without air support, the Marines were forced, for instance, to resort to using mirrors to look around corners. O’Donnell reports that many if not most of the Jihadists were under the influence of drugs, such as cocaine and amphetamines. These were used to enhance their aggression. The insurgents were often from other countries. Chechens, in particular, frequently dressed in coalition uniforms.

O’Donnell’s accounts of the international press are darkly amusing. While many had insisted on accompanying the Marines, nearly all fled at the first sound of gunfire. One German journalist squawked, “This is horrible they are bombing schools and hospitals, I’ve got to do something.” She then fled to the rear — no doubt establishing in print what she failed to see with her own eyes.

We Were One is written unevenly. While O’Donnell at times does a good job relating the details of combat, the book often jumps wildly from military operations to Marines “confessing” how “intense” things are — sometimes in embarrassing, Oprah-style, streams of profanity. This, no doubt, is to create an impression of “authenticity.” The book begins with thumbnail sketches of the Marines whom the book ostensibly will focus on. However the book is not long enough to permit the reader to identify with the men, and their individuality is quickly lost. While the copy of We Were One I read was an early review edition, it was difficult to know what the Marines were accomplishing. There was no map which might have been used to indicate progress or objectives. Even more oddly, after 150 pages of “rock-n-roll” war, the book ended with a chapter on “Post Traumatic Stress Disorder” — the last thing that you would expect from the caricatures of macho Marines the book goes to such length to convey.

We Were One is spattered with references grandiosely comparing the battle in Fallujah to Gettysburg and Hue (Vietnam). Unfortunately, O’Donnell’s prose fails to live up to its subject. The writing is so full of clichés that I felt at times I was playing a "shoot-em-up" videogame instead of reading an account of a military operation. (One chapter begins by quoting lines from AC/DC.) For a book supposedly about the fraternity of men, there was less focus on the men, and more on “things that go boom.”

Whatever the outcome of the war in Iraq, the decisive battles will be fought in the American and, increasingly, the international media. During the Vietnam War, there were many important battles — the Tet Offensive of ’68, the Easter Offensive of ’72 — but their significance was determined far from the battlefield. In the recorded sessions he made with his generals and colonels, General Creighton Abrams spent a good deal of time joking darkly about how the American media would turn American and South Vietnamese victories into defeats. By substituting non-military objectives for military objectives, the media was able to present allied efforts in Vietnam as hopeless. The South Vietnamese and American defeat of the Viet Cong during the Tet Offensive was presented to the American public in the image of Saigon police chief Nguyen Ngoc Loan executing a Viet Cong with a shot in the head.2  The heroism of South Vietnamese forces in their victory over the North in the Easter Offensive of 1972 was dismissed as being “dependent on US airpower.”3

When America chose to invade Iraq, Colin Powell insisted that we seek UN approval for our actions. Nations without democratic traditions and unable to defend themselves against terrorist attack were asked to commit themselves to supporting future military action against an allegedly nuclear armed Iraq. The resulting spectacle of American diplomats begging and cajoling third world dictatorships for support was the result of subjecting US foreign policy to non-democratic public opinion.

We Were One does a fine job bringing to Americans the reality of combat in Iraq — something the major news media has scrupulously avoided reporting. In doing so, O’Donnell is helping transform the debate on Iraq from a survey of whether or not non-democratic nations approve of America bringing democracy to Iraq — to one involving our neighbors, families, sons and daughters. In short, he is giving democratic public opinion an opportunity to educate itself.

Endnotes

1. See Andrew Krepinovich’s The Army and the Vietnam War (Johns Hopkins, 1988).

2. The photo was of Saigon police chief Nguyen Ngoc Loan executing Viet Cong captain Nguyen Van Lem, the leader of a “Revenge Platoon” and responsible for murdering the families of police officers.  Loan had just been told that Lem had succeeded in killing a police major, one of Loan’s closest friends. While the photograph was carried around the world (and a silent video tape embellished  with the sound of a “shot” also was circulated by the western media), no context was provided to the viewer, who was left to assume that the South Vietnamese regime was barbaric.

3. In his A Better War: The Unexamined Victories and Final Tragedy of America’s Last Years in Vietnam (Harvest, 2000), Lewis Sorley argues that the South Vietnamese Army’s incompetence is one of the myths American’s have embraced to excuse their abandonment of Vietnam in 1973. The absence of scholarly work on the ARVN (Army of the Republic of Vietnam) would seem to support Sorley’s contention. I haven’t read the recent book on the ARVN by Robert Brigham (ARVN: Life and Death in the South Vietnamese Army, University of Kansas, 2006), but it is doubtful that the 130 pages it dedicates to its subject will change matters significantly. See Quang Pham’s review of it on the Amazon.com website.

We Were One is available on Amazon.com.

Book Reviews, Foreign Affairs: Iraq War



Nathan Alexander is a professor of history at Troy University.
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  1. A comment on the over-abundance of profanity in an otherwise excellent book: The author undoubtedly means to be "honestly" quoting and expressing what he hears coming out of the mouth of soldiers under duress, but because a book is such a dense, compacted expression of the very complex lives of the men he lived among, to represent his subjects as "continual strings of expletives" does these human beings a grave injustice and takes away (through undue emphasis on salty language) from their truly heroic efforts. It would be a tragedy for men who are real heros, giving their lives for the freedom of the rest of us, to have their heroic acts sublimated by focus on their lat profane words. Perhpas the author culd have kept his concept of "realism" in perspective by using an underline_ to indicate such language…then the reader would not be overwhelmed by it and the real and important theme(s) of the book would have a better chance to inspire…..Two additional comments: Repetition of any sort quickly becomes tedious and boring..and the repetition of profanity is no exception. And, finally, this post is not meant to cast judgment on our men in uniform, it's merely meant to suggest that writers who try and take "realism" to an extreme, may actually end up distorting the truth in ways never intended.

    Comment by Stephen Edward | February 20, 2007

  2. 1) "Towards the latter years of the Vietnam War, the Marine Corps had success in pacification by placing smaller units in villages.1 Despite frequent comparisons between Iraq and Vietnam, I’ve yet to read anyone advocate that Americans adopt this successful strategy in Baghdad."

    I was indirectly advocating CAP throughout this book. Many of the CAP teams in Vietnam did. Through cultural awareness and security, many CAP teams gained the trust of these Vietnamese villages and obtained actionable intelligence on the enemy. If the author of the review bothered to probe deeper into this matter, he would have known that Marine General Mattis directly advocated a modified version of CAP before the first battle of Fallujah. Thankfully, our strategy seems to be changing, at least in Baghdad.

    2) “While O’Donnell at times does a good job relating the details of combat, the book often jumps wildly from military operations to Marines “confessing” how “intense” things are — sometimes in embarrassing, Oprah-style, streams of profanity. This, no doubt, is to create an impression of “authenticity.”

    Every single quote in the book can be backed up by the Marines' own words. The quotes are verbatim. Marines swear, especially in combat! I was not trying to "create an impression of authenticity," what's in the book is what these brave men said and I can back up every quote in the book with video tape or audio tape recordings. I find this statement inaccurate and slanderous to the men the book and me.

    4) “There was no map which might have been used to indicate progress or objectives."

    We Were One had been on the shelves for months after the reviewer allegedly read the book. Why was a draft version of the book used for the review? The final version has half a dozen highly detailed maps that mark all the platoon’s major engagements. Blow up boxes inside the maps even detail the individual movements of each Marine.

    5) “Even more oddly, after 150 pages of “rock-n-roll” war, the book ended with a chapter on “Post Traumatic Stress Disorder” — the last thing that you would expect from the caricatures of macho Marines the book goes to such length to convey.

    Did the reviewer even read the book? The Marines in this book convey their deep emotions in battle some of it is “macho” most of it tragic. An entire chapter details every tearful word of Lima Companies’ memorial service to the fallen Marines; how Sgt. Tremore felt cleaning blood and brians off his fallen comrades’ weapons; how they openly cried over the loss of their best friends.

    When I wrote the book First Platoon wanted PTSD mentioned: “Pat people need to know what's going on.” Like the profanity issue, would the reviewer rather have me sanitize the text since it doesn’t fit into his seemingly romantic version of how war impacts the participants?
    Moreover, every Marine in the Platoon who reviewed the book thought it was accurate and told me they cried when they read “We Were One” Platoon leader Lt. Jeff Sommers bluntly stated:
    “We Were One captures every action, every thought, but most importantly every emotion that goes with victory, and the loss of friends in battle.”
    Review after review states the book brings out the emotions associated with the battle of Fallujah. The Leatherneck: “We Were One” is the best snapshot written to date that details the ferocity of the house-to-house fighting that took place that week.” Or the Army Times: “We Were One,” more than the others, captures the sensory details and emotional drama of good men killing and dying for one another and their country.”

    6) "We Were One is spattered with references grandiosely comparing the battle in Fallujah to Gettysburg and Hue (Vietnam)."

    "We Were One" quotes an officer who thought Fallujah might be the Gettysburg of the war. This qoute is buried in the afterward and not part of the narrative. The quotes referencing these battles do not appear in the printed version of this book. Again, the book had been out for months after this review had been written.

    The Hue Reference is justified by most historians and is a direct reference to Mike Hanks' CD of Vietnam war songs he played when the platoon went into defensive positions at night. According to Corporal Sodja and Sgt. Conner, the CD brought them back to Nam. The music reminded Sodja of his father who nearly died trying to clear Hue.

    Semper Fi,

    Patrick O'Donnell
    http://www.wewereone.com

    Comment by PKO | April 9, 2007

  3. Without Patrick O'Donnell's account of the battle for Fallujah, the discussion of the
    war might continue to degenerate into innanities such as are sustained by the current
    political climate ("all Bush's fault"). O'Donnell reminds us that this war is about our
    sons and daughters and that whatever one may think of Bush, we should not forget
    who is doing the fighting (and what our soldiers think about what it is they are doing). O'Donnell
    spent part of his life trying to remind us of this–a great service to America and its
    soldiers.

    That said, a couple of comments:

    1. A writer must select from among many sources those things that will comprise
    his/her narrative. I never questioned the authenticity of your sources–I questioned
    the choice of those selected to convey the significance of the Battle of Fallujah. The
    Boston Herald used to run a column "The World According to Roger," which printed
    verbatim the ace's often broken speech. This was no doubt accurate–however
    failed to convey the significance of Roger Clemons to baseball. It is a truism to say that Marines
    swear in combat. However they do a great deal more than that–and I got the point about
    swearing (and so on) after a page or two.

    2. I was very interested in finding out whether lessons from Vietnam had been applied in
    Fallujah. It would have been useful to provide a context for Fallujah by writing this clearly in
    the introduction.

    3. I used the text sent me by your publisher. If the released edition contains maps
    that enable the reader to follow the narrative better, so much the better.

    4. It is very possible that the Fallujah fight may serve as a "modern Hue". However
    except for an assertion or two that this was the case, I found little from the written
    text that would back this up. You prefer to make this point through your emphasis on
    "authenticity." I would have preferred a bit less of this and a bit more context.

    In either case, the Marines have or would have been well served.

    Nathan Alexander

    Comment by Nathan Alexander | April 15, 2007

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